My Personal Target: To produce a poster that has detailed explanation. At times I tend to use simple explanation and I should further explore it. To make sure I also don’t waffle on and keep my explanation precise and concise.
Comment (Lena) : I think you managed to achieve your personal target of making your explanations concise and not trying to waffle on. Your poster was also detailed and had examples of each type of clause. There were some grammar and spelling issues but other than that the poster was informative and eye-catching,
Comment (Lena) : I think you managed to achieve your personal target of making your explanations concise and not trying to waffle on. Your poster was also detailed and had examples of each type of clause. There were some grammar and spelling issues but other than that the poster was informative and eye-catching,
For something like a poster, which is obviously designed for display and reaching a large audience, it is absolutely essential that every error is ironed out before publishing. I know you are the type of learner who applies herself well, but just make sure that you are meticulous when it comes to proofreading - don't hesitate to employ the assessment of others as well; it's not cheating and testing it on a sample audience will provide useful feedback. Friends, siblings, parents, teachers of another subject - these are all good sources of assessment and feedback.
ReplyDeleteThere are some grammatical errors but overall, the poster is well organised, detailed explanation and quite eye-catching. :)
ReplyDeleteSometimes the explanation is quite confusing, and as Stephanie pointed out there were some grammatical errors. But it's very eye-catching and well organised.
ReplyDeleteIn the future I should spend more time in reviewing my work. As I do know that at times I don't really do well in proof reading as I don't analyze the text fully. Thank you for all the feedbacks everyone. :)
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