Monday, 5 March 2012

Making the familiar to unfamiliar.

A lone dancer stands in an empty room with no walls, but as it reaches the bottom edge, the room is filled with a sea of markings engraved to the smooth floor. There are many of it’s kind, all of them are skilled at what they do as there is a greater source controlling them and handling its body by wrapping its authority over the dancer. The bottom of the dancer is stood up on a sharp toe, where, like a ballerina it twirls and always keeps its balance. Across the smooth surface of the floor, the toe excretes a black fluid trail while it dances in patterns forming symbols lying in a horizontal formation. Permanent and forever there, the dancer has finished it’s work of art.

2 comments:

  1. What a lovely metaphorical description - really beautiful.

    I noticed in your exam and in looking at this that you have a slight issue with prepositions so can you make it a point to check these carefully, particularly before the CA?

    A great example for others!

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    1. Thank you miss. I did struggle a bit with time as this was the first time I was doing the exam. But I will keep this in mind for next time :)

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